Уважаемые форумчане, обращаюсь с двумя просьбами:
1.Покритикуйте резюме
2. Подскажите какой из двух вариантов OBJECTIVE больше подойдет.
Моя цель – через 3 (а может 4 или 5) лет занять инженерную должность в энергоснабжающей организании. Но я отдаю себе отчет что не имея опыта работы в стране, не имея эвалюированного диплома, имея «средний» английский об этом пока можно забыть. Задача-минимум - занять Entry-Level Position (Apprentice Lineman or Electrician), а все остальное – потом.
Надо ли в WORK HISTORY перечислять всю мелочевку, которая никак не связана с будущей работой?
Oleg O-ov
______________________________ _________
8500 Jefferson Ave # 55. Denver, CO 80237
email: ooo@hotmail.com , cell: (720) 276-50
OBJECTIVE (variant 1):
An Apprentice Lineman position that involves the installation and maintenance of electrical equipment
OBJECTIVE (variant 2):
A position where I can utilize my experience with the installation and maintenance of electrical power equipment.
EXPERIENCE:
Eight years experience as an electrical engineer for power supply distribution company LLC Tagilenergoseti, Russia.
· Calculated and supervised modes of power supply equipment, calculated the losses of energy in transmission lines and transformers for a company that had more than 1000 miles of power transmission lines and 546 transformer stations.
· Created technical proposals, schematics and installation guidelines for new customers.
· Made technical direction with maintaining, repairing and installing of electrical lines and substations.
· Prepared budgets for the maintenance, repair and installation of power lines and substations. (Prepared estimates for about 15 new pieces of equipment per month. Prepared approximately 200 estimates monthly for repairs of existing equipment.)
· Cost analysis between budgets and contractor estimates.
· Performed monthly inspections of workplaces to prevent occupational hazards and examine safety precautions.
One-year experience as a journeyman electrician for residential electrician company LLC Amper. Russia
· Installed, modified, maintained and troubleshoot electrical and mechanical appliance and system’s facilities.
· Read and interpreted blueprints and schematics for installation procedures
· Oversaw preventative maintenance on installed electrical equipment
· Inspected and operated equipment for accuracy of assembly and installation
· Tested equipment, diagnose malfunctions, and corrected problems
WORK HISTORY:
September 1988 - October 1988 GPO Uralvagonzavod, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Adjuster of machines with numerical control and industrial robots
July 1992 - September 1992. LLC NTMK, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Electrician in maintaining and repairing of electrical equipment
September 1993 - September 1995. LLC Telekon, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Operator of video recording
September 1995 - November 1996. LLC Amper, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Journeyman Electrician
November 1996 - December 2004 LLC Tagilenergoseti, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Electrical Engineer
EDUCATION:
M.S., 1989-1995, Electrical Engineering, Urals Polytechnic Institute, Russia.
B.S., 1985-1989, Machine-building, Nizhnij Tagil Machine Building Technical School, Russia.
1.Покритикуйте резюме
2. Подскажите какой из двух вариантов OBJECTIVE больше подойдет.
Моя цель – через 3 (а может 4 или 5) лет занять инженерную должность в энергоснабжающей организании. Но я отдаю себе отчет что не имея опыта работы в стране, не имея эвалюированного диплома, имея «средний» английский об этом пока можно забыть. Задача-минимум - занять Entry-Level Position (Apprentice Lineman or Electrician), а все остальное – потом.
Надо ли в WORK HISTORY перечислять всю мелочевку, которая никак не связана с будущей работой?
Oleg O-ov
______________________________ _________
8500 Jefferson Ave # 55. Denver, CO 80237
email: ooo@hotmail.com , cell: (720) 276-50
OBJECTIVE (variant 1):
An Apprentice Lineman position that involves the installation and maintenance of electrical equipment
OBJECTIVE (variant 2):
A position where I can utilize my experience with the installation and maintenance of electrical power equipment.
EXPERIENCE:
Eight years experience as an electrical engineer for power supply distribution company LLC Tagilenergoseti, Russia.
· Calculated and supervised modes of power supply equipment, calculated the losses of energy in transmission lines and transformers for a company that had more than 1000 miles of power transmission lines and 546 transformer stations.
· Created technical proposals, schematics and installation guidelines for new customers.
· Made technical direction with maintaining, repairing and installing of electrical lines and substations.
· Prepared budgets for the maintenance, repair and installation of power lines and substations. (Prepared estimates for about 15 new pieces of equipment per month. Prepared approximately 200 estimates monthly for repairs of existing equipment.)
· Cost analysis between budgets and contractor estimates.
· Performed monthly inspections of workplaces to prevent occupational hazards and examine safety precautions.
One-year experience as a journeyman electrician for residential electrician company LLC Amper. Russia
· Installed, modified, maintained and troubleshoot electrical and mechanical appliance and system’s facilities.
· Read and interpreted blueprints and schematics for installation procedures
· Oversaw preventative maintenance on installed electrical equipment
· Inspected and operated equipment for accuracy of assembly and installation
· Tested equipment, diagnose malfunctions, and corrected problems
WORK HISTORY:
September 1988 - October 1988 GPO Uralvagonzavod, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Adjuster of machines with numerical control and industrial robots
July 1992 - September 1992. LLC NTMK, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Electrician in maintaining and repairing of electrical equipment
September 1993 - September 1995. LLC Telekon, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Operator of video recording
September 1995 - November 1996. LLC Amper, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Journeyman Electrician
November 1996 - December 2004 LLC Tagilenergoseti, City of Nizhnij Tagil. Electrical Engineer
EDUCATION:
M.S., 1989-1995, Electrical Engineering, Urals Polytechnic Institute, Russia.
B.S., 1985-1989, Machine-building, Nizhnij Tagil Machine Building Technical School, Russia.
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