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  • Покритикуйте резюме data analyst

    _fname _lname
    Cell:xxx/xxx-xxxx
    Email: name@gmail.com

    Objective
    Solution-oriented, highly analytical, and resourceful candidate with over 15 years of analytical, development, troubleshooting, end-user service, and network support experience, looking for a challenging position as a data analyst.

    Professional Skills
    • Operational systems: Windows, MacOS, Linux.
    • Web programming languages: HTML, CSS, JavaScript, PHP.
    • Data managing languages: SQL (T-SQL, MySQL and MSSQL).
    • Programing and macro languages: C#, C++, VBA.
    • Office software: MS Office (Excel, Word, Access), OpenOffice.
    • Graphic editors: Adobe Photoshop, Paint.NET etc.
    • Web applications: SharePoint, e-commerce (Magento).
    • Search engine optimization

    Experience Highlights


    Taxi Driver (Uber)
    Self-employed/Student, City1, CA 05/16 to Present
    Temporary working as taxi driver. Also getting educated in a new direction (data analysis). Building website based on CMS Drupal as own project.


    System administrator/Web programmer
    Company1, City2, CA 01/14 to 04/16
    Supported as system/network administrator 20+ end user’s workstations, 5+ hardware servers (Hyper-V), 20+ virtual servers (Windows and Linux), 5+ managed network equipment (routers and switches) and various network devices (printers, VoIP system etc.). Managed user/computer policy via Active Directory. Build 2 e-commerce websites based on open-source Magento platform.


    Electronics/Computer Repair Specialist
    Company2, city3, CA 9/11 to 12/13
    Major responsibility is to promote good customer service by building customer loyalty through courtesy and friendliness; deliver sparkling customer service and demonstrate graciousness that would be remembered by the customers. Perform on-site repair and preventive maintenance on personal computers, cameras, cell phones, various electronic devices and related peripherals. Evaluate technical issues, solve customer concerns, and troubleshoot computer problems in an efficient and courteous manner. Build custom computers to best serve the needs of our growing business.



    Network Administrator, VoIP Administrator
    Company3, City3, CA 11/09 to 10/11
    Analyzed, troubleshoot and improved VoIP routing system troubleshooting. Technical support for VoIP customers. Designed and developed PHP+MySQL+JavaScript website.. Network and wireless design, support, troubleshooting. Troubleshoot and repaired tens computers, laptops and printers.

    Associate Programmer Analyst
    Company4, City3, CA 05/08 to 11/09
    Gathered information required for building a new application needed to help users to perform their routines. Designed, developed, tested and implemented windows based applications on C# .NET, T-SQL. Provide support for application users. Improved and updated current software. Managed user’s access and policy via Active Directory

    Programmer Assistant/IT technician
    College1, City3, CA 06/06 to 05/08
    Designed, developed and tested web based applications using C#, ASP.NET, T-SQL, ASP, FoxPro. Administrated MSSQL, UNIX and Windows based servers. Helped web and windows application users with technical support. Trained users how to use new software. Troubleshoot, resolved hardware and software issues.

    Programmer/ IT Field Technician
    Company5, City4, CA 09/07 to 04/08
    Designed and developed web-applications based on PHP, VBScript, MySQL, HTML. Supported 40+ offices as field technician (software and hardware), routine updates, troubleshooting etc. Imaged PCs using Norton Ghost.

    Network Administrator Assistant
    College1, City4, CA 04/06 to 06/06
    Troubleshoot networks, OS (Windows and MacOS) and hardware issues. Tech support end users.

    Quality Assurance Engineer
    Company6, City4, CA 02/05 to 08/06
    Tested applications for mobile devices, prepared quality control reports. Helped programmers to build quality software for mobile devices.

    SQL Programmer /Software analyst
    Company7, City5, Ukraine 02/02 to 10/04
    Planed, developed and introduced software, provided trainings for end users. Supported current and gathered and documented information from clients how to modify, update software.

    Database Programmer/ IT Technician
    Company8, City5, Ukraine 10/99 to 02/02
    Provided staff and users with assistance solving computer related problems. Determine computer software or hardware needed to set up or alter system. Planed systems upgrades. Altered software according to user’s requirements.

    - - - Updated - - -

    Education
    College1 City4, CA
    Major Database Management
    Learned:
    • Data communications
    • Linux OS Administration
    • MS Office (Word, Excel, Access)
    • CCNA (Cisco)
    • Network Security
    • TCP/IP
    • Database programming (Oracle)
    • Web scripting (PHP, MySQL, JavaScript, Ajax, Perl)
    • Adobe Photoshop
    • Flash
    • Design and Algorithms
    • OOP (Java)
    • Web Site Development (HTML, CSS)

    Technical University City5, Ukraine
    Bachelor of Computer Science Graduated 02/02
    Learned:
    • Operational Systems
    • Engineer and computer graphics
    • Programming (procedural and OOP)
    • Database management
    • Web technologies and design
    • Pattern recognition and classification
    • Industrial technologies software development
    • Architecture Computing Systems
    • Networking
    • Design Microprocessor Systems and Programming (Assembler)
    • Design computing control systems
    • Reliability and troubleshooting
    • Cryptography (coding and decoding)
    • Digital processing images and signals
    • Design data networks
    • Network Security
    • Wireless Network
    • Control Systems (design, computer simulation, analysis)
    • Artificial intelligence

    High School City5, Ukraine
    High School Diploma graduated 06/97
    Qualifications Summary

    • Demonstrated skills in developing and implementing technological solutions with emphasis on delivering cost-cutting and productivity improvements.
    • Expertise in computer software configuration, network administration, and the testing/repair of various hardware applications.
    • In depth understanding of all the hardware components and assemblies in the computer system.
    • Proven ability to provide creative and effective issue resolution through the application of highly developed problem-solving skills.
    • Team player with a reputation for providing excellent user service and the tenacity to work with demanding clientele.
    • Fluent in English and Russian.

  • #2
    Re: Покритикуйте резюме data analyst

    Originally posted by Lazy
    _fname _lname
    Cell:xxx/xxx-xxxx
    Email: name@gmail.com

    Objective
    Solution-oriented, highly analytical, and resourceful candidate with over 15 years of analytical, development, troubleshooting, end-user service, and network support experience, looking for a challenging position as a data analyst.

    Professional Skills
    • Operational systems: Windows, MacOS, Linux.
    • Web programming languages: HTML, CSS, JavaScript, PHP.
    • Data managing languages: SQL (T-SQL, MySQL and MSSQL).
    • Programing and macro languages: C#, C++, VBA.
    • Office software: MS Office (Excel, Word, Access), OpenOffice.
    • Graphic editors: Adobe Photoshop, Paint.NET etc.
    • Web applications: SharePoint, e-commerce (Magento).
    • Search engine optimization

    Experience Highlights


    Taxi Driver (Uber)
    Self-employed/Student, City1, CA 05/16 to Present
    Temporary working as taxi driver. Also getting educated in a new direction (data analysis). Building website based on CMS Drupal as own project.


    System administrator/Web programmer
    Company1, City2, CA 01/14 to 04/16
    Supported as system/network administrator 20+ end user’s workstations, 5+ hardware servers (Hyper-V), 20+ virtual servers (Windows and Linux), 5+ managed network equipment (routers and switches) and various network devices (printers, VoIP system etc.). Managed user/computer policy via Active Directory. Build 2 e-commerce websites based on open-source Magento platform.


    Electronics/Computer Repair Specialist
    Company2, city3, CA 9/11 to 12/13
    Major responsibility is to promote good customer service by building customer loyalty through courtesy and friendliness; deliver sparkling customer service and demonstrate graciousness that would be remembered by the customers. Perform on-site repair and preventive maintenance on personal computers, cameras, cell phones, various electronic devices and related peripherals. Evaluate technical issues, solve customer concerns, and troubleshoot computer problems in an efficient and courteous manner. Build custom computers to best serve the needs of our growing business.



    Network Administrator, VoIP Administrator
    Company3, City3, CA 11/09 to 10/11
    Analyzed, troubleshoot and improved VoIP routing system troubleshooting. Technical support for VoIP customers. Designed and developed PHP+MySQL+JavaScript website.. Network and wireless design, support, troubleshooting. Troubleshoot and repaired tens computers, laptops and printers.

    Associate Programmer Analyst
    Company4, City3, CA 05/08 to 11/09
    Gathered information required for building a new application needed to help users to perform their routines. Designed, developed, tested and implemented windows based applications on C# .NET, T-SQL. Provide support for application users. Improved and updated current software. Managed user’s access and policy via Active Directory

    Programmer Assistant/IT technician
    College1, City3, CA 06/06 to 05/08
    Designed, developed and tested web based applications using C#, ASP.NET, T-SQL, ASP, FoxPro. Administrated MSSQL, UNIX and Windows based servers. Helped web and windows application users with technical support. Trained users how to use new software. Troubleshoot, resolved hardware and software issues.

    Programmer/ IT Field Technician
    Company5, City4, CA 09/07 to 04/08
    Designed and developed web-applications based on PHP, VBScript, MySQL, HTML. Supported 40+ offices as field technician (software and hardware), routine updates, troubleshooting etc. Imaged PCs using Norton Ghost.

    Network Administrator Assistant
    College1, City4, CA 04/06 to 06/06
    Troubleshoot networks, OS (Windows and MacOS) and hardware issues. Tech support end users.

    Quality Assurance Engineer
    Company6, City4, CA 02/05 to 08/06
    Tested applications for mobile devices, prepared quality control reports. Helped programmers to build quality software for mobile devices.

    SQL Programmer /Software analyst
    Company7, City5, Ukraine 02/02 to 10/04
    Planed, developed and introduced software, provided trainings for end users. Supported current and gathered and documented information from clients how to modify, update software.

    Database Programmer/ IT Technician
    Company8, City5, Ukraine 10/99 to 02/02
    Provided staff and users with assistance solving computer related problems. Determine computer software or hardware needed to set up or alter system. Planed systems upgrades. Altered software according to user’s requirements.

    - - - Updated - - -

    Education
    College1 City4, CA
    Major Database Management
    Learned:
    • Data communications
    • Linux OS Administration
    • MS Office (Word, Excel, Access)
    • CCNA (Cisco)
    • Network Security
    • TCP/IP
    • Database programming (Oracle)
    • Web scripting (PHP, MySQL, JavaScript, Ajax, Perl)
    • Adobe Photoshop
    • Flash
    • Design and Algorithms
    • OOP (Java)
    • Web Site Development (HTML, CSS)

    Technical University City5, Ukraine
    Bachelor of Computer Science Graduated 02/02
    Learned:
    • Operational Systems
    • Engineer and computer graphics
    • Programming (procedural and OOP)
    • Database management
    • Web technologies and design
    • Pattern recognition and classification
    • Industrial technologies software development
    • Architecture Computing Systems
    • Networking
    • Design Microprocessor Systems and Programming (Assembler)
    • Design computing control systems
    • Reliability and troubleshooting
    • Cryptography (coding and decoding)
    • Digital processing images and signals
    • Design data networks
    • Network Security
    • Wireless Network
    • Control Systems (design, computer simulation, analysis)
    • Artificial intelligence

    High School City5, Ukraine
    High School Diploma graduated 06/97
    Qualifications Summary

    • Demonstrated skills in developing and implementing technological solutions with emphasis on delivering cost-cutting and productivity improvements.
    • Expertise in computer software configuration, network administration, and the testing/repair of various hardware applications.
    • In depth understanding of all the hardware components and assemblies in the computer system.
    • Proven ability to provide creative and effective issue resolution through the application of highly developed problem-solving skills.
    • Team player with a reputation for providing excellent user service and the tenacity to work with demanding clientele.
    • Fluent in English and Russian.
    Скажу сразу что детально не читал, но две вещи бросились в глаза:
    1) Objective - это какую позицию вы ищите, а не кто вы такой;
    2) Уберите Убер драйвер, поскольку это не имеет никакого отношения к позиции которую вы ищите;

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    • #3
      Re: Покритикуйте резюме data analyst

      Не похоже на резюме реального айтишника, прожившего в Штатах более 10 лет и поменявшего несколько работ. Рекомендую проштудировать статьи по написанию резюме.

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      • #4
        Re: Покритикуйте резюме data analyst

        Могу в чем-то ошибаться, но после 10-летнего опыта работы в ИТ мысли примерно такие.

        Резюме - это краткий(!) рекламный(!) буклет, рассказывающий о подвигах(!) а не подробная биография для отдела кадров КГБ.
        Всё, что не о подвигах, только мешает рекрутеру найти в резюме то, что он ищет.

        Поставьте себя на место рекрутера. Будь я рекрутером, многие вещи из этого резюме посылали бы мне алармы.

        1. Objective обычно пишут свежие выпускники, претендующие на стартовые позиции. Резюме профессионала должно начинаться сразу с Qualifications Summary, которые здесь находятся в том конце, до которого никто не дочитает. "Over 15 years of experience" совершенно не та квалификация, для которой data analyst position is challenging.
        Вопрос: почему такой опытный (15 лет!) кадр всего этого не знает?

        2. Насчет Skills. Нафига это перечисление внутри Office software? Любой средний специалист сейчас должен владеть всем этим по умолчанию. Почему претендент считет это каким-то особым навыком? Да что ж это за компании, где он работал?
        Graphic editors: Adobe Photoshop, Paint.NET etc. - тот же вопрос. Нафига аналитику программа для редактирования растровых изображений? Он вообще в курсе, чем занимаются аналитики?
        SharePoint указан только один раз, из чего можно сделать вывод, что речь идет о пользовательских навыках, а не построении SharePoint-сервисов. Тогда - та же фигня, что и с MS Excel.

        3. Taxi Driver -??? Если взял паузу для переквалификации, зачем тратить на это время? Или денег на жизнь нет после 15 лет в ИТ? Нахрена мне, рекрутеру, такие аналитики? Если пауза в работе, чтобы getting educated, то - что за учреждение, какой сертификат?
        "Building website based on CMS Drupal as own project" - это достижение для профессионала с 15-летним опытом?

        4. Даже серьезные конторы, которые реально проверяют резюме, обычно не требуют описания подвигов старше 7-летней давности.
        Если лет 10 назад работа была в какой-нибудь компании из F500, упомянуть не повредит. Но то, что было 15 лет назад в Киеве, кому интересно?
        Bachelor of Computer Science - это хорошо. Но, опять же, кому нужен весь этот список изученных в прошлом веке дисциплин? То, что претендент умеет реально, должно быть указано в самом начале!
        High School Diploma graduated 06/97 - Hello, Captain Obvious!

        //////////////////
        Как-то так.

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        • #5
          Re: Покритикуйте резюме data analyst

          Operational systems?

          Experience Highlights
          Taxi Driver (Uber)???? WTF??????

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          • #6
            Re: Покритикуйте резюме data analyst

            Благодарю отписавшимся, буду учить матчасть и исправлять

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            • #7
              Re: Покритикуйте резюме data analyst

              Я бы советовал не исправлять, а написать заново с нуля.

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              • #8
                Re: Покритикуйте резюме data analyst

                Таки да... Таки да.......

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