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  • Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

    Я прошу помочь мне составить грамотно резюме.



    Хочу найти и начать свою первую работу в Калифорнии в качестве

    PC technician.

    Практически ничего не знаю про здешнюю систему приема на работу.

    Даже сомневаюсь что позиция,на которую можно претендовать с таким сертификатом,называется так.



    У меня сертификат А+.

    В Америке никогда не работал,живу в Лос-Анжелесе меньше года.

    Разговорный язык - не легко подается,хотя понимаю когда говорят.

    Что касается опыта работы - то здесь все очень сложно.

    В России работал 5 лет програмистом в системе "1С-Предприятие",имею навыки работы в MSSQL server и знаю язык SQL умею составлять запросы.



    С учетом того что этих знаний недостаточно для того чтобы найти подходящую работу,я решил начать с самого нижнего уровня, а параллельно подтягивать знания для работы DBA.



    Если кто знаком с рынком труда по позиции PC technician (если это так называется),подскажите пожалуйста,насколько реально найти работу с моими параметрами,какая реальная зарплата.



    Может поможете советами,только сильно не критикуйте,пожалуйста, мои способности.

    Может кто поможет найти работу,буду премного благодарен.




  • #2
    Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

    Резюме за Вас никто составить не сможет - нужно слишком много о Вас знать для этого.

    Вы лучше напишите резюме сами, и вывесите сюда. Помогут откорректировать. Начать стоит отсюда: http://www.computerra.ru/offli ne/2002/459/19923/

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    • #3
      Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

      Спасибо!

      На днях напишу и опубликую.

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      • #4
        Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

        Mojno posmotret' zdes' [url="http://www.studynotes.net/jobs.htm"] http://www.studynotes.net/jobs .htm

        Zdes' kstati est' stat'i po A+

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        • #5
          Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

          Ниже приведен мой черновой вариант резюме если можно дайте Ваши исправления, дополнения. Резюме составлено из разных образцов, многие моменты будут откорректированы.





          CONTACT INFORMATION

          Name

          Phone

          Email



          OBJECTIVE

          To obtain a position as a PC specialist, computer technician, assistant system administrator or junior network administrator to demonstrate my knowledge of installation, configuration and upgrading of PCs.



          BACKGROUND SUMMARY

          A+ Certified computer technician with excellent problem solving experience in the computer information technologies. Background includes hands-on experience with , LAN/WAN environments, Desktop Computer Repair, Software Installation Wireless LAN Setup Printer Service Router/Firewall Install, etc. Demonstrated record of success in troubleshooting computers, increasing efficiency, and optimizing the access and utilization of information.

          Demonstrated ability to integrate computer skills, customer support experience, and related education to exceed technical, business, and customer requirements. Skilled in PC repair, troubleshooting and fixing problems while minimizing customer stress levels. Professionally certified by CompTIA.

          I believe that I could be of tremendous value to your firm. I would be a very enthusiastic and hardworking addition to your organization. I learn very quickly, believe in my ability to get the job done, and am a self-starter, able to work independently.

          I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience.



          SKILLS

          * Built, maintained, and repaired computer systems to improve speed, reliability, and efficiency of operation.

          * Reduced stress levels of customers by adopting a cooperative attitude and positive approach to every task and assignment.

          * Diagnosis and Troubleshooting, Maintenance and Repair, Software Installation/Configuration,Har dware Installation/Configuration, PC Hardware Design and Setup, User Training and Support

          * Designed and built multiple PC units for clients as well as for personal use according to usage requirements.

          * Setting Up Hubs and Workstations, Wireless Networking for Windows 95/98/2000, Wide Area and Local Area Networks, Routers, Firewall, Internet Connectivity, Network Setup, Network Print Server



          * MS SQL Server 7.0/2000, SQL language, MS Office

          * Network Troubleshooting Server Installation/Configuration Network Security

          * Antivirus, Communications Software, Software Utilities, Server Software Back Up

          * Operating Systems: All Windows platforms.

          * Working knowledge in: Building and Testing, Maintenance and Repair, Hardware/Software Installation, System Upgrades, System Configuration,

          Administering MS SQL Server, Administering network.



          PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE

          PC Technician - 1999 to 2001

          Moscow, Russia

          * Maintained computers and proprietary software at the highest operational status.

          * Established excellent working relationship with customers and provided rudimentary computer training.

          * As a field tech, responsible for responding to all situations including delivering new systems, performing data transfers, upgrades, and setting up home networks including wireless networking.

          * Provided PC/LAN support

          * Provided computer advice and technical support to customers

          * Maintained hardware upgrades and provided troubleshooting and software support on network workstations.

          * Skilled at diagnosing and repairing personal computers.

          * Provided technical assistance to office staff, assisting with network access, printing, and application software operation.

          * Installed workstations and software, and performed diagnostics on workstation peripherals.

          * Repaired Desktop Computer

          * Laptop Computer Service, Virus Detection/Removal, Rollouts & Upgrades, Software Installation Wireless LAN Setup, Printer Service, Router/Firewall Install

          * Performed in-home setup of computer systems and related equipment. Routine maintenance on all types of computer equipment and printers. Software and mechanical upgrades.Hardware and software support and installation.



          Database Administrator – 2001 to 2004

          Moscow, Russia

          * Created databases in the development, test, and production servers.

          * Authorized MS SQL server users and granted permissions to them.

          * Managed and monitored the use of disk space, database space, CPU, memory, cache, and user connections and processes.

          * Implemented procedures for backup and recovery of production servers.

          * Developed various procedures.

          * Transferred large quantities of data in and out of MS SQL server databases.

          * Written queries.



          EDUCATION

          H.S. Diploma – 1979

          High School, Moscow, Russia



          B.E. Bachelor of Engineering – 1990

          Industrial Institute, Moscow, Russia



          Certificate, A+ Technician - 2005

          Integrated Digital Technologies Corp., Pasadena,CA

          Comp TIA A+ Certification test taken at the Pasadena Pearson VUE testing center.

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          • #6
            Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

            Anatoly_ писал(а) Sat, 09 July 2005 02:16
            ...

            В Америке никогда не работал,живу в Лос-Анжелесе меньше года.

            ...


            Меньше года - это 364 дня?

            Не представляу как можно прожить почти год в Лос-Анжелесе совсем не работая...



            Пара советов - список мест работы и обучения пишется в обратном порядке (от последнего к первому) ну и место работы указывать нужно. Также мне кажетса, что обжэктив нужно укоротить до 1, максимум двух позиций (например, [assistant system administrator] или [junior network administrator], остальное бла-бла-бла вы им на интервью раскажете ) иначе непонятно чем вы хотите заниматься и что вы собственно умеете.



            П.С. У вас последнее место работы [Database administrator] + три года опыта работы, может вам лучше в эту степь двигаться?

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            • #7
              Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

              замечания только по формату, не по содержанию.



              [I believe that I could be of tremendous value to your firm. I would be a very enthusiastic and hardworking addition to your organization. I learn very quickly, believe in my ability to get the job done, and am a self-starter, able to work independently.

              I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience.]



              Этому не место в резюме. Вы можете написать это в [cover letter].



              В конце каждого [bullet point] вы либо ставите точку, либо не ставите. Определитесь - ставить или нет, и следуйте этому формату.



              [Background includes hands-on experience with<font color="crimson"> ,[/size] ]



              запятая не нужна.



              [Reduced stress levels of customers] = [Reduced customers' stress levels]



              [Software Installation/Configuration,Har dware Installation/Configuration] --&gt; [check spelling]



              Между предложениями ставятся два пробела. Ну хотя бы один!



              [Written queries] = это прошедшее время от [write queries]?



              Диплом средней школы в резюме не нужен. И что такое [<font color="crimson">B.E.[/size] Bachelor of Engineering]?

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              • #8
                Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

                [B.E. Bachelor of Engineering]? - как на английском диплом инженера?



                После 1 корректировки резюме растянулось на 3 страницы.

                Так ли обязательны



                CONTACT INFORMATION

                Name

                Phone

                Email



                OBJECTIVE

                To obtain a position as a PC technician or assistant system administrator.



                BACKGROUND SUMMARY

                A+ Certified computer technician with excellent problem solving experience in the computer information technologies.

                Background includes hands-on experience with LAN/WAN environments, Desktop Computer Repair, Software Installation Wireless LAN Setup Printer Service Router/Firewall Install, etc.

                Demonstrated record of success in troubleshooting computers, increasing efficiency, and optimizing the access and utilization of information.

                Demonstrated ability to integrate computer skills, customer support experience, and related education to exceed technical, business, and customer requirements.

                Skilled in PC repair, troubleshooting and fixing problems while minimizing customer stress levels.

                Professionally certified by CompTIA.

                I am available for an interview at your earliest convenience.



                SKILLS

                * Built, maintained, and repaired computer systems to improve speed, reliability, and efficiency of operation.

                * Reduced customers' stress levels by adopting a cooperative attitude and positive approach to every task and assignment.

                * Diagnosis and Troubleshooting, Maintenance and Repair, Software Installation/Configuration, Hardware Installation/Configuration, PC Hardware Design and Setup, User Training and Support.

                * Designed and built multiple PC units for clients as well as for personal use according to usage requirements.

                * Setting Up Hubs and Workstations, Wireless Networking for Windows 95/98/2000, Wide Area and Local Area Networks, Routers, Firewall, Internet Connectivity, Network Setup, Network Print Server.

                * MS SQL Server 7.0/2000, SQL language, MS Office.

                * Network Troubleshooting Server Installation/Configuration Network Security.

                * Antivirus, Communications Software, Software Utilities, Server Software Back Up.

                * Operating Systems: All Windows platforms.

                * Working knowledge in: Building and Testing, Maintenance and Repair, Hardware/Software Installation, System Upgrades, System Configuration, Administering MS SQL Server, Administering network.



                PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE

                Database Administrator – 2001 to 2004

                ..., Moscow, Russia.



                * Created databases in the development, test, and production servers.

                * Authorized MS SQL server users and granted permissions to them.

                * Managed and monitored the use of disk space, database space, CPU, memory, cache, and user connections and processes.

                * Implemented procedures for backup and recovery of production servers.

                * Developed various procedures.

                * Transferred large quantities of data in and out of MS SQL server databases.

                * Write queries.



                PC Technician - 1999 to 2001

                ..., Moscow, Russia.



                * Maintained computers and proprietary software at the highest operational status.

                * Established excellent working relationship with customers and provided rudimentary computer training.

                * As a field tech, responsible for responding to all situations including delivering new systems, performing data transfers, upgrades, and setting up home networks including wireless networking.

                * Provided PC/LAN support.

                * Provided computer advice and technical support to customers.

                * Maintained hardware upgrades and provided troubleshooting and software support on network workstations.

                * Skilled at diagnosing and repairing personal computers.

                * Provided technical assistance to office staff, assisting with network access, printing, and application software operation.

                * Installed workstations and software, and performed diagnostics on workstation peripherals.

                * Repaired Desktop Computers.

                * Laptop Computer Service, Virus Detection/Removal, Rollouts &amp; Upgrades, Software Installation Wireless LAN Setup, Printer Service, Router/Firewall Install.

                * Performed in-home setup of computer systems and related equipment. Routine maintenance on all types of computer equipment and printers. Software and mechanical upgrades.Hardware and software support and installation.



                EDUCATION

                Certificate, A+ Technician - 2005

                Integrated Digital Technologies Corp., Pasadena, CA.

                Comp TIA A+ Certification test taken at the Pasadena Pearson VUE testing center.



                B.D. Bachelor Degree of Engineering – 1990

                Industrial Institute, Moscow, Russia

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                • #9
                  Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

                  [color="orangered"]B.Sc.[/size] in Engineering - u menja tak



                  [color="orangered"]B.S.[/size] in Engineering



                  [color="red"]BS[/size] in Engineering



                  BS = bachelor of science

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                  • #10
                    Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

                    Цитата:




                    После 1 корректировки резюме растянулось на 3 страницы.

                    я смотрю, вы повторяетесь:



                    [* Maintained computers and proprietary software at the highest operational status.

                    * Established excellent working relationship with [color="blue"]customers and provided rudimentary computer training[/size].

                    * As a field tech, responsible for responding to all situations including delivering new systems, performing data transfers, upgrades, and setting up home networks including wireless networking.

                    * Provided PC/LAN support.

                    * Provided [color="blue"]computer advice and technical support to customers[/size].

                    * Maintained hardware upgrades and provided troubleshooting and software support on network workstations.

                    * <font color="crimson">Skilled at diagnosing and repairing personal computers[/size].

                    * Provided technical assistance to office staff, assisting with network access, printing, and application software operation.

                    * <font color="orange">Installed workstations and software,[/size] and performed diagnostics on workstation peripherals.

                    * <font color="crimson">Repaired Desktop Computers.[/size]

                    * Laptop Computer Service, Virus Detection/Removal, Rollouts &amp; Upgrades, Software Installation Wireless LAN Setup, Printer Service, Router/Firewall Install.

                    * Performed in-home setup of computer systems and related equipment. Routine maintenance on all types of computer equipment and printers. <font color="orange">Software and mechanical upgrades. Hardware and software support and installation[/size]. ]

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                    • #11
                      Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

                      Спасибо Lucy.

                      Откорректирую повторы.

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                      • #12
                        Ответ: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

                        Посмотрите http://www.computerra.ru/offline/2002/459/19 923/" Резюме по-американски

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                        • #13
                          Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

                          после получения иммиграционной визы, моему сыну помогли устроится на работу и с проживанием тоже, и он адаптировался быстро..мы за него спокойны

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                          • #14
                            Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

                            Спасибо, всем. Столько полезной информации)))

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                            • #15
                              Re: Помогите составить грамотное резюме!

                              Хоть бы кто нибудь выложил готовое резюме, с которым его брали на работу. Ну что бы для себя понятнее было=)

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