Я тут резюме Сисадмина исправил. Не согласитесь ли взглянуть?

[Arcady]

Я тут резюме исправил. Не согласитесь ли взглянуть?



ARCADY LEVITANUS, MCSE

1414 E 12 st. Brooklyn, NY 11230

arcady12@gmail.com



OBJECTIVE IT Engineer \ NT-W2K Systems Administrator



EXPERIENCE SUMMARY

 Expert experience levels with all phases of NT/Windows 2000 System Administration

 Network Conversions, Remote Access, System Security

 Active Directory Implementation



INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY SKILLS

Platforms:

• Expert knowledge of installation and administration of Windows NT, 2000, 2003 Server

• Microsoft Exchange 5.5, 2000 and 2003

• IIS - Proxy Server

• Microsoft Terminal Server

• Windows XP/2000

Production Software:

• Expert knowledge of MS Office 97, 2000, XP, 2003 (Word, Excel, Outlook, Power Point, Access and Front Page)

• Administration of Hummingbird's WorldDocs, DocsOpen, PowerDocs, CyberDocs, DocsFusion and Image document management solutions

• Back-up Exec and Arcserve data backup and recovery +Tape Backup Drives

• RightFax network faxing

• Computer Associates, McAfee, Panda and Symantec (Norton) Anti-Virus software.

• GIS Systems (ArcInfo, ArcGis, ArcView)

Other:

• Network topologies and voice and data cabling, including FIBER OPTIC connections. CAT5, RJ45, Fiber Optic wiring drop + patch bay

• Internet connectivity and security

• TCP\IP, PPP, PPTP and other Protocols

• DNS/WINS/DHCP configuration and administration

• Cisco, Nortell routers, switches

• Firewalls (Hardware and Software)

• VPN, Shiva and other remote access solutions

• Mass workstation deployments using Ghost disk imaging and SysPrep utilities.

• SAN(IBM FAStT 700) and NAS storage solutions

• Expert in maintaining and building enterprise IBM, COMPAQ, HP, DELL servers

• Print Servers + HP, Xerox, and Epson ink/laser printers and copiers

• Expertise with RAID 0,1,5 Technology Fault Tolerance

• Expertise with Server Drive Arrays



PROFESSIONAL PROFILE

A confident and dependable IT ENGINEER professional offering over 5 years of comprehensive and diversified experience in a combination of managerial, customer service, technical support, helpdesk, systems administration, and network administration in both a large user base and small environment. Proficient with software support and end-user support via phone and email. PC and Systems support with both hardware and software. Skilled trouble-shooter and decision maker; able to locate problem areas and develop practical solutions. Possesses outstanding interpersonal and communication skills. Able to effectively interact with individuals for strategic planning and implementation. Highly dependable. Excellent capacity for attention to detail. High achiever. Works well under pressure and in fast paced environments. Technically minded; quickly adapts to new technologies. Excels in both autonomous and team oriented environments. Quick learner. Strong work ethic. Works with little or no supervision. Consulting experience. May build and fix all devices by himself.



PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE



SYSTEM ADMINISTRATOR, BEN-GURION UNIVERSITY BEER-SHEVA, ISRAEL

Perform all tasks involved in designing, managing, maintaining and administering a Windows NT family (NT, 2000, 2003, XP) domain with 7 servers and over 100 workstations at several locations. Active Directory, DNS, WINS, and DHCP Servers. Install and configure Windows NT family desktops and servers and associated peripherals. Setup, document and manage standard Windows desktop and server configurations. Support and upgrade a standard suite of software in a Windows environment. Maintain the integrity of workstation and server hardware and software. Troubleshoot and resolve Windows workstation problems at local and remote sites. Troubleshoot and resolve Windows server problems. Administer Windows servers and domains. Manage network attached storage to provide file services to the Windows domain. Backup and restore systems as required. Manage moves, adds, or changes of workstations and supporting peripherals. Mass deployed using Ghost disk imaging and SysPrep utilities



IT ENGINEER, TAMAR REGIONAL COUNCIL DEAD SEA, ISRAEL

Responsibilities include computer strategy and budgeting determination, identifying the information technology needs, designing computer infrastructure, providing technical and maintenance support while performing systems integration, installations and upgrades, utilizing all the skills, technologies and software listed above. Administrating the network and computer systems (10 production servers and approximately 70 workstation including Hummingbird's DocsFusion Server with SQL 2000, SAN IBM FAStT 700, ArcServe server and GIS system). Managing relationships with software and hardware suppliers. Utilizing excellent analytical skills provide advanced server, desktop, laptop, printer and peripheral repair, general troubleshooting and end user support. Installation and license management. Instrumental in initiating, planning and executing projects which was highly successful.



SYSTEMS ENGINEER, NIRVANA HOTEL DEAD SEA, ISRAEL

Managed Computer Department, performed network administration for a handled installations, operation and maintenance of the network. Efficiently provided end user support and training for new hires and staff. Assisted with trade show presentations related to remote office system access strategies and options.



CLERK, MERCANTILE DISCOUNT BANK, ISRAEL

Successfully handled all facets of office administration and operations management. Researched, planned and oversaw initial agency automation project. Served as System Administrator.



CERTIFICATES: MCSE 2000 - Microsoft Certified Systems Engineer

Hackers Exposed - IBM Corp.



EDUCATION

• BEN-GURION UNIVERSITY OF THE NEGEV, Beer-Sheva, Israel

Bachelor of Science in Business and Industry Administration

• FORDHAM UNIVERSITY, New York, USA

Admitted for graduate study toward the Master of Science degree in Computer and Information Sciences



MILITARY SERVICE

CHIEF OF RULLING STATION (Radio-Electronics War detachment), Soviet Army

CLERK, Israel Air Force, Israel Defence Forces



LANGUAGES: English, Russian, Hebrew, French



 References Available Upon Request

 Green Card holder - Lawfully admitted to the U.S. for permanent residence and work

[Mikhail Popov]

1. Исключительно важно использовать буллеты вместо нечитаемой простыни. Примеров миллион и неупотребление буллетов Вами я воспринимаю как принципиальную позицию, нежели простое незнание факта. Это позиция глубоко ошибочная. Каждый буллет как молоток вбивает в голову читателя то, что Вы предлагаете:



SYSTEM ADMINISTRATOR, BEN-GURION UNIVERSITY BEER-SHEVA, ISRAEL

* Perform all tasks involved in designing, managing, maintaining and administering a Windows NT family (NT, 2000, 2003, XP) domain with 7 servers and over 100 workstations at several locations.

* Active Directory, DNS, WINS, and DHCP Servers. ([color="orangered"]<font size="3">глагол потеряли[/size][/size])

* Install and configure Windows NT family desktops and servers and associated peripherals.

* Setup, document and manage standard Windows desktop and server configurations.

* Support and upgrade a standard suite of software in a Windows environment.

* Maintain the integrity of workstation and server hardware and software.

* Troubleshoot and resolve Windows workstation problems at local and remote sites.

* Troubleshoot and resolve Windows server problems.

* Administer Windows servers and domains.

* Manage network attached storage to provide file services to the Windows domain.

* Backup and restore systems as required.

* Manage moves, adds, or changes of workstations and supporting peripherals.

* Mass deployed using Ghost disk imaging and SysPrep utilities

[Mikhail Popov]

Arcady писал(а) Sat, 19 March 2005 02:07
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE



SYSTEM ADMINISTRATOR, BEN-GURION UNIVERSITY BEER-SHEVA, ISRAEL

IT ENGINEER, TAMAR REGIONAL COUNCIL DEAD SEA, ISRAEL

SYSTEMS ENGINEER, NIRVANA HOTEL DEAD SEA, ISRAEL

CLERK, MERCANTILE DISCOUNT BANK, ISRAEL

2. Или пишите WORK EXPERIENCE (вместо PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE) или уберите клерковскую работу. (Есть такой старый еврейский - мне можно - анекдот: "Матвей Абрамыч - одно из двух - или снимите крест, или оденьте штаны" )



3. У Вас нет ясности в том, чем отличаются секции

- EXPERIENCE SUMMARY

- INFORMATION TECHNOLOGY SKILLS

- PROFESSIONAL PROFILE

Более того, все три крайне редко встречаются в одном резюме. Из-за этого все развалилось - нет четкой молотково-убойной структуры.



Так что, буллеты во всех секциях вместо простыни и две секции вместо трех. После этого резюме станет элементарно читаемым (сейчас этого нет) и можно будет сделать следующий шаг.



Но, даже в таком виде, оно уже на порядок сильнее первой версии.

[Polaris]

Military Service надо убрать- вдруг HR officer пацифист какой-то

Часть текста надо разбросать в Cover Letter - а оно-то где?

Про языки тоже вряд ли стоит включать, если это не спец.требование нанимателя.

Упоминание про GC тоже лишнее - нелегалы больше по помидорным полям промышляют и Wal-Mart'ы убирают.

Опыт работы: я бы просто перечислил места работ и должности.

[Mikhail Popov]

Polaris писал(а) Sun, 20 March 2005 20:57


Упоминание про GC тоже лишнее - нелегалы больше по помидорным полям промышляют и Wal-Mart'ы убирают.

Есть люди, которым нужна виза Н1В. При отсутствии американского опыта первая мысль - Н1В. Так что, о гринкарте сказать не вредно.

Polaris писал(а) Sun, 20 March 2005 20:57


Опыт работы: я бы просто перечислил места работ и должности.

Тогда произойдет две вещи:

1. Резюме будет на поллвтну страницы

2. Ключевые слова в перечислении навыков не будуг подтверждены конкретными проектами, что ослабляет резюме. Как читатель я хочу не толдько видеть упоминание о чем-то, а хочу знать как, прикаких обстоятельствах это было использовано. Именно это и есть опыт работы, а не, скажем, опыт академический.