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Objective: a position as design engineer.

Type of work: full time job.

Personal information.

First name and last name: ZZZZZZZZZZ
Date of birth: ZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Place of birth: Moscow, Russia.
Citizenship: Russian Federation
Address: ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ
Phone (mob.): ZZZZZZZZZ
E-mail: ZZZZZZZZZZZZZ


Professional knowledge.

CAD/CAM/CAE: CATIA v5 (very good, 3 years), CAD: AutoCAD (excellent, 5 years).
PDM: ENOVIA v5 LCA (basic level, 6 months), ENOVIA SmarTeam (good, 2 years).

Technologies: composite technologies (very good, more than 3 years), cryogenic technologies (good, more than 1.5 years), welding and the soldering of metals (good, more than 1.5 years), vessels working under pressure (good, more than 1.5 years), injection of plastics under pressure (basic level, 6 months).

Systems of standards: ISO, DIN EN, AD2000 (PED 97/23).


Practical experience.


The most important achievements.

Took a part in large projects:
- Designed body of trains and elements of stations of monorail road in Moscow.
- Designed systems of Boeing Dream Liner 787 airplane.
- Designed hydrogen systems storage volume in 250 m3 (the project in the field of European hydrogen power engineering).
- Designed refueling system of carrier rocket for French launch complexes in Northern Guiana.
- Designed the accelerator of nuclear particles of new generation (project Clic, Switzerland).

Since August 2007 till April, 2008.
Design engineer (full time work).
“Siemens VDO engineering” company. Moscow, Russia.
Company designs and manufactures auto components.
Responsibilities: Designed mechanical parts of instrument clusters for Russian automotive market (injection of plastic under pressure). Technical support of sales office. Accounted of the cost price of new products.

Took a part in preparation of exhibitions of group of "Siemens VDO" companies and took a part in the international exhibitions.


Since November 2005 till June, 2007.
PDM developer, design engineer (full time work).
JSC “Cryogenmash” company, Moscow region. Russia.
Company designs and manufactures of cryogenic equipment.

Responsibilities: Customized CATIA v5 and ENOVIA SmarTeam for needs design departments of company. Created CATIA v5 catalogues of standard parts and products.

Designed of cryogenic system of storage in volume of 250 m3 (CATIA v5).
Created catalogues of the borrowed parts and assemblies. Trained employees of company ENOVIA SmarTeam, AutoCAD. First level support of ENOVIA SmarTeam and AutoCAD.

Drawing up of the technical File of cryogenic system of technical gases storage (the requirement to materials, requirements to a design of products, the description of technical decisions, the description of used normative documents, requirements to quality policy, the requirement to technological processes) according to requirements of European directive PED 97/23 and AD2000.

Designed composite supports working at T=20 °K.
Drew up the technical file of refueling system of carrier rocket for French launch complexes in Northern Guiana. Search of suppliers.


Achievement: Due to optimization of the design of composite supports of cryogenic tanks in volume of 250 m3 these tanks have now the best of the world characteristic describing daily losses of cryogen technical gas.

Since March 2005 till November 2005
Design engineer (Full time work)
"NIK" Ltd (it’s a partner of "Boeing" company), Moscow.
Company designs and manufactures airplanes.

Responsibilities: Designed systems of Boeing Dream Liner 787 airplane (CATIA v5, ENOVIA v5 LCA, paperless technology).

Achievement: Development of preliminary methodology of engineering FEA calculations in CATIA v5.

Since August 2003 till March 2005
Lead engineer, design engineer (Full time work). ”Fiberglass technologies and structures" Company, Moscow, Russia.

Company designs and manufactures body of monorail trains (the basic method of manufacture is contact formation).

Responsibilities: Designed fiberglass structures (Solid Works and ACAD), attended exhibitions and studied new technologies.


Education.

2000-2006: Moscow State University of environmental engineering. Mechanical faculty. Master of technique and technology (finished 2-year education program but the dissertation has not been written yet).

1996-2000: Moscow State University of environmental engineering. Mechanical faculty. Bachelor of technique and technology.

1991-1996: Moscow auto-road College. Mechanical faculty. Technician-mechanic.

Trainings.

Name of course: CAD/CAM/CAE CATIA v5 for designing high precision products.
Educational organization: European center of nuclear researches CERN, Geneva, Switzerland
Duration: 3 weeks

Name of course: CAD/CAM/CAE CATIA v5
Educational organization: Boeing Company. Moscow, Russia
Duration: 360 class periods

Name of course: How to design pipelines in CAD/CAM/CAE CATIA v5.
Educational organization: Boeing Company. Moscow, Russia
Duration: 100 class periods

Name of course: Industrial risk management. High technology manufacture. Injection of plastics under pressure.
Educational organization: Siemens VDO. Babenhausen, Germany
Duration: 100 class periods

Name of course: Introductory course in supervisory management.
Educational organization: NEBS Management. Moscow, Russia
Duration: 30 class periods

Name of course: ENOVIA v5 R14. Product definition release package, basic and advanced concepts.
Educational organization: Boeing company. Moscow, Russia. Dassaut systemes кcompany. Moscow, Russia.
Duration: 60 class periods

Name of course: Stress analysis of composite carbon structures
Educational organization: “NIK” Company". Moscow, Russia
Duration: 32 class periods

Name of course: LCD indicators.
Educational organization: Varitronix Company, Munich, Germany
Duration: 2 days

Languages and computer skills.

Russian: native
English: intermediate

Computer skills: CATIA v5 R16 (part design, generative shape design, photo studio, assembly design, analysis of ergonomics, welding design, drafting, sheet metal design, knowledge adviser, catalog editor, piping design, FT&A), ENOVIA SmarTeam R14, ENOVIA LCA, Documentum, AutoCAD 2005, MS Office, Microsoft project, Visio, PhotoShop, Corel draw.

Additional information.

Additional data: healthy way of life.
Hobby: Sports, books.

[D-sp]

Используйте только стандарнтые американские формы построения резюме, к которым агенты и работодатели привыкли.

Резюме вроде этого должно быть упаковано в одну страницу и очищено от шелухи.

Objective: a position as design engineer. - очень вяло.
Указывать год рождения нельзя.
Место рождения никого не интересует.
Указывать владение языками - нелогично.
Хобби и т.п. - не нужно.

Name of course, Educational organization и т.п. - все эти слова не нужны при правильном форматировании текста.
Вместо:
Since November 2005 till June, 2007
нужно писать:
11/05 - 06/07

(full time work) - тоже лишнее, - об этом расскажете на интервью.

2000-2006: Moscow State University of environmental engineering. Mechanical faculty. Master of technique and technology (finished 2-year education program - что за путаница: 2-х летняя программа за 6 лет? Напишите годы обучения 2004-2006 или оставьте только Master Degree.

but the dissertation has not been written yet - вот нафига работодателю это знать при первой оценке кандидата?

1991-1996: Moscow auto-road College. Mechanical faculty. Technician-mechanic. - учились 5 лет? - напишите полученную степень. Если получили Assos., напишите, что учились 2 года.

Имхо, 11 лет учебы - по американским меркам - занадто. Выглядит, либо как неправда, либо как летопись разгильдяя, либо как чрезмерная квалификация(не любят).

Имхо, слишком много тренингов - запаришься читать. Оставьте 3-4 наиболее интересных для конкретного работодателя, либо наиболее солидных, либо наиболее свежих - с датами.


Всё написанное, естественно, всего лишь мое личное мнение

[dell_graf]

Поработал над резюме, убрал всю шелуху...


Objective: to get design engineer position.


CONTACT INFORMATION


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SUMMARY.

CAD/CAM/CAE: CATIA v5 (very good, 3 years), CAD: AutoCAD (excellent, 5 years).
PDM: ENOVIA v5 LCA (basic level, 6 months), ENOVIA SmarTeam (good, 2 years).

Technologies: composite technologies (very good, more than 3 years), cryogenic technologies (good, more than 1.5 years), welding and the soldering of metals (good, more than 1.5 years), vessels working under pressure (good, more than 1.5 years), injection of plastics under pressure (basic level, 6 months).

Systems of standards: GOST, ISO, DIN EN, AD2000 (PED 97/23).

PRACTICAL EXPERIENCE

08/07 - 04/08
Design engineer. “Siemens VDO engineering” company. Moscow, Russia.
(Company designs and manufactures automotive product).
Responsibilities: Designed mechanical parts of instrument clusters for Russian automotive market (injection of plastic under pressure). Technical support of sales office. Accounted the cost price of new products.
Took a part in preparation of exhibitions of "Siemens VDO" companies and took a part in the international exhibitions.

11/05 - 06/07
SmarTeam developer, design engineer.
JSC “Cryogenmash” company, Moscow region. Russia.
(Company designs and manufactures cryogenic equipment).

Responsibilities: Customized CATIA v5 and ENOVIA SmarTeam for needs design departments of company. Created CATIA v5 catalogues of standard parts and products.

Designed of cryogenic system of storage in volume of 250 m3 (CATIA v5).
Created catalogues of the borrowed parts and assemblies. Trained employees of company ENOVIA SmarTeam, AutoCAD. First level support of ENOVIA SmarTeam and AutoCAD.

Drew up of the technical File of cryogenic system of technical gases storage (the requirement to materials, requirements to a design of products, the description of technical decisions, the description of used normative documents, requirements to quality policy, the requirement to technological processes) according to requirements of European directive PED 97/23 and AD2000.

Designed composite supports working at T=20 °K.
Drew up the technical file of refueling system of carrier rocket for French launch complexes in Northern Guiana. Search of suppliers.

Achievement: Due to optimization of the design of composite supports of cryogenic tanks in volume of 250 m3 these tanks have now the best of the world characteristic describing daily losses of cryogen product.

03/05 - 11/05
Design engineer. "NIK" Ltd (it’s a partner of "Boeing" company), Moscow. Russia. (Company designs airplanes).
Responsibilities: Designed systems of Boeing Dream Liner 787 airplane (CATIA v5, ENOVIA v5 LCA, paperless technology).

08/08 - 03/05
Lead engineer, design engineer. ”Fiberglass technologies and structures" Company, Moscow, Russia. (Company designs and manufactures composite body of monorail road trains).

Responsibilities: Designed fiberglass body of a monorail trains and elements of an interior (Solid Works and ACAD). Coordinated projects with customer: FGUP «Moscow institute heating engineering» (enters in «ROSCOSMOS»).

Designed composite parts of anti-ice system for stations of monorail road.
Attended exhibitions and studied new technologies.

EDUCATION

1996-2000: Moscow University. Bachelor of technique and technology.
1991-1995: Moscow auto-road College. Technician- mechanic.

TRAININGS

CAD/CAM/CAE CATIA v5 for high precision products (project Clic). European center of nuclear researches CERN, Geneva, Switzerland (3 weeks).

CAD/CAM/CAE CATIA v5. Boeing Company. Moscow, Russia (460 class periods)

Industrial risk management. High technology manufacture. Injection of plastics under pressure. Siemens VDO. Babenhausen, Germany (100 class periods).

ENOVIA v5 R14. Product definition release package, basic and advanced concepts. Boeing company & Dassaut systemes company. Moscow, Russia (60 class periods).


Computer skills: CATIA v5 R16 (part design, generative shape design, photo studio, assembly design, analysis of ergonomics, welding design, drafting, sheet metal design, knowledge adviser, catalog editor, piping design, FT&A), ENOVIA SmarTeam R14, ENOVIA LCA, Documentum, AutoCAD 2005, MS Office, Microsoft project, Visio, PhotoShop, Corel draw.

[eccentric]

Дело в том, что сv и резюме - это две совершенно разные вещи. Они даже по форме пишутся совсем по-разному и содержание, в силу этого, у них различно.

В США cv используют крайне редко, в основном в сферах, где очень много творчества: художники, писатели, ученые и т.д. - в этом случае форма cv лучше подходит для характеристики профессиональных качеств чем форма резюме.

Ваша начальная проблема была в том, что вы в качестве исходника взяли именно чье-то cv, а не резюме. Поэтому там у вас вообще все неправильно! Выкиньте это все и забудьте. Найдите на сайтах поиска работы несколько резюме по своей специальности. И уже из них, на их основе, конструируйте свое.

[D-sp]

Originally Posted by eccentric

Выкиньте это все и забудьте. Найдите на сайтах поиска работы несколько резюме по своей специальности. И уже из них, на их основе, конструируйте свое.

Да, так будет проще. Тем более, что таких резюме в сети полно.
Если experience большой, можно расписать на 2 страницы:
http://www.resume-resource.com/extec11.html

[dell_graf]

Да, так будет проще. Тем более, что таких резюме в сети полно.
Если experience большой, можно расписать на 2 страницы:
http://www.resume-resource.com/extec11.html

Спасибо за ссылку, очень полезный сайт.